Beyond the twilight,bleeding clouds
The red canopy,the painted faces blushed
Always behind me I warn you, my shadow
Lying on the ground replied the dark one
You never turn your back to sun,Or
perhaps, to some unknown land I may lead
where no one looks at your face so ugly
And with shapeless long body,so horrible.
If you are obedient I shall always follow
In all your joys and sorrows,ever be with you
About Me
- Hibiscus
- Iam an ordinary woman,like the hibiscus flower.I like children and sure they like me like a hibiscus flower
5 comments:
enik athrekku mansilayilla...an abstract way of writing.
when a man warns his shadow to be always behind,the shadow replies that it is possible only if the man never turns his back to sun.If he does,the shadow will be in the front,long and ugly.
What is "sun" here? usually it stands for light, truth, supreme power etc. But it does not fit in here. Please explain.
Priya suhruthukkale....
nammal light sourcenu puram thirinju ninnal nammute shadow eppozhum nammute munnilaayirikkum.ennal light sourcene nokkininnal shadow eppozhum purakilaayirikkum..Here shadowyotu eppozhum pinnil varaan parayunnu.ennal sun or light sourcenu puram thirinju nilkkaruthennu shadow parayunnu.Verumoru scientific fact.
now that you put it that way, the poem seems very good!!
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